Alright 4th try animating.
This took approximately 80 hours to make. I wanted to do something more with interactivity as well as be very ambitious and add animations for Vinyl in most transitions, so I hope you can stand the cheesy story and enjoy it.
Development of the story:
I often wonder, what does Vinyl do when shes not at the club? Does she ever leave it? Does she have friends to hang out with, I don't know but if this scenario occurs I'd probably be her friend.
Or maybe future episodes might show her more. *u*
There are 10 endings.
9 short ones.
1 climatic one.
Heres the link to the music. Newgrounds was on maintenance before I could see the author and credit her correctly.
Whispers in the Rain
Composer: Annette 'Troisnyx' Singh (TroisNyxEtienne)
You might be able to give me a good enough reason to make a really big game out this. Psh. Maybe.. maybe...
EDIT: If you ever see some white or stuff.. just refresh it usually goes away.
I seriously started recording me playig this and i got a bunch of warm fuzzies at the end. These are the things that actually make me think about life and friends and stuff. You know that game, Everlasting Beauty? This is way better then it. This is a really amazing thing. Keep up the good work.
Now I'm going to lie down and try not to cry because THE WARM FUZZIES BUILDING UP IN MY HEART IS HURTING THERE ARE SO MUCH
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
Are we Octavia in this game? O.o because if sooo then thisss is sooooo cuuutteeee
I GOT THA SWAGGER LIKE DASH
Vinyl: ...I...can't hear..anything....
(Some random pony in background: OOOOOOOOOOOH! VINYL JUST GOT SERVED!
Vinyl: Shut up,random ponyville citizen!!!
Random pony:IN HER OWN STORY TOO!!!
Me: Oh,look who's here!*panics*
Derpy: EVERYPONY RUN!!!
Pinkie: -opens portal to Applejack's basement- EVERYONE IN HERE!
Pinkie: IT'S A NICE PLACE TO HIDE AND HAS A FOOD STORAGE!
-everypony but vinyl runs into portal-
Vinyl: What's going on?
????: Surprise buttsex time!
-vinyl looks next to her-
Vinyl: OH SH*T
Molestia: It's your turn tonight Vinyl!
Vinyl: F*** this **** I'm going in there! -jumps in portal-
Molestia: Nobody likes me....?
Molestia: Oh,that's silly. Luna will always love me!
That night, in Molestia's bedroom..
Luna: -holding knife- This is revenge for everything you've done to me!
Luna: Oh,and sending me to the moon too.
And somewhere in the middle of a volcano....
Daring Do: -thinking to self- 'Now I've gotta find out what those withes are brewing up and report it to the princess....'
Witch person: -brewing recipe for a GPDTS (Gooey Purple Disgusting and Talking Substance)-
GPDTS: Nothing can stop the smooze!
Daring Do: **** I didn't expect that!
-witch person looks at daring do-
Daring Do: ****!
-smooze breaks through door to Applejack's basement-
Rarity: YES! Lord Smooze has RISEN!
-rarity worships lord smooze*
Derpy: This world is so filled with VIOLENCE and VILLANY!
TO BE CONTINUED....
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
Non-Story Pinkie Pie: And THAT'S how Equestria was overthrown by smooze!
Twilight: I thought the story wasn't over yet.
Pinkie Pie: Well, PART of how it was ovethrown by smooze!
Pinkie: For now, I need a milkshake break.
Applejack: A...milkshake break?
Pinkie: It's part of my daily routine now!
Applejack: Okay then...
Pinkie: So anyways,TO BE CONINUED!!!! DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN
Me: Well,I for one am looking for flowers for my art project.
Vinyl: Oh,I can help ya with that. -Vinyl grabs a couple of flowers from a nearby field and presents them to you-
Vinyl:Look at these flowers. Aren't these beautiful? I bet you'll do great on your project.
Vinyl: Ah,yes. I know what you mean. Rain is almost like nature's rhythm and beat. Disorganized but sounds so calming.
Me: I still have to ask you, why are you here by yourself?
Vinyl: Oh,no reason. I'm here because I'm here. You shouldn't be so nosy, hehe...
(Nose Pony: You know, *sniff* NOSY is an offensive word to me...
Nosey the Pony: *cries*
Nosey's friend: Aw, great, now you made her CRY! JERK!
Vinyl: I didn't mean too...
Nosey's Friend: You should be ashamed of yourself! *Nosey's friend comforts Nosey*
Me: Well, that was akward, even for random stuff in the background....)
*You arrived at the Everfree Forest Hoping to find some interesting flowers to use for your art project thats due tomorrow. Walking through you see a dark figure far away that seems to be standing still.*
(Lightning Bolt the background pony: When you approach it,it's actually slender pony coming to kill you! Vinyl: Shut up, Lightning Bolt. Lightning Bolt: Okay....)
*Approach because there's no other choice*
Vinyl: Who are you?
Me: I should ask you the same thing.
Vinyl: Well, I was here first, so you should explain yourself first.
Me: You've got a point. I'm looking for something.
(Molestia: I'm looking for something too.... Vinyl: Molestia, forgive me, but this isn't the time. Molestia: Awwww....)
Vinyl: Well,stranger,name's Vinyl. What are you doing in the rain?
Me: I enjoy it because it is peaceful.
Vinyl: I know what you mean.Rain is almost like Nature's rhythm and beat. Disorganized but sounds so calming.
(Discord: Did somepony just say DISORGANIZED an CALMING in the same sentence?
Vinyl: WHY IS EVERYONE INTERRUPTING MY STORY?!?!
Vinyl: Stop it guys,or I'm bringing out Molestia.
Twilight Sparkle: Dear Princess Celestia, toay I learned not to f*ck with Vinyl....
Twilight with panic in voice: Okay,move on! Please don't bring out molestia...)
Okay guys,I on't want this one comment taking up too much space,so see ya in part two!
And hopefully we won't see Molestia there too....
She became deaf by the Poison Joke...
Obviously I would help her
I feel really bad about it but I still can't help that I find it funny.